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Dreamer's Block
Contributed by
TheForgottenMelody
on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 05:11:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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I can’t sleep right now
Because without any dreams,
What’s the point at all?
I need imagery
That’s solid or without shape
Detailed or blurry
Can’t Darkness come in?
That bleak, unwanted bed guest
Is welcomed tonight
How about dear Hope?
That white dress she wears smells sweet
As it drapes my brain
But no one will come
I'll sleep dreamless forever
Even when I'm dead
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2005-02-05 17:11:50]
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Re: Dreamer's Block
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 05:17:26 PM AEST
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| I really liked this. It was sad, but thought-provoking. Great write. |
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Re: Dreamer's Block
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 05:18:42 PM AEST
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| keep up the great work! |
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