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''Refuse for the pain Wh*re part II...''

Contributed by xMizeriex on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 04:57:21 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I am ensanguined.
Watch me bleed.
I am burning.
I'm learning.
Educated in your skills of deception.
LOOK WHAT YOU'VE DONE!
TAKE IT IN!
My retribution.
Watch this girl saunter
in her putrid sin.
This pretty whore.
AM I BEAUTIFUL NOW?
AM I EVERYTHING YOU WANTED?
I've tried so hard.
but nothing is ever simple.
Is my ritual good enough for you?
I bleed.
I need.
PATHETIC!
What's wrong with this picture?
YOU FED ME THIS SH*T BUT
YOU WILL SWALLOW IT!
Blasphemously I sit in the
Garden of Mary,
And the devil serpent
wraps itself around my neck
As I pick her black flowers.
And I whisper.
He loves me not.
He loves me not...
And I scream.
WHY CAN'T YOU JUST LOVE ME?
Why can't you just love me?
I never thought the fires of this purgatory would reach me,
I never thought the smoke could decieve me.
But i'm here now and
there's no escape.
I am lost and all I see is hate!
Bleed dry.
Bleed dry.
I'm burning.
YOU'RE NEVER THERE!
I'm learning.
HOW CAN YOU SAY YOU CARE?
You only hurt the ones you love,
But these bruises keep returning.
Blood from an oral orifice,
And people who care don't do this!
YOU CAN'T DO THIS!
I bleed.
I bleed.
Bleed.
This feeling returns.
And i do it again.
I can't stop.
But it's not like before.
Ecstacy doesn't surround me,
Just a resounding pain.
This isn't right.
Letters to words,
words to phrases,
Around in my head,
They fill me.
I'm not alone?
THEN WHY DO I FEEL LIKE THIS?
WHY WON'T YOU JOIN MY IN THIS ILLEGITAMATE BLISS?
This is so *******.
Everything is *******.
YOU'RE JUST ANOTHER VICTIM!
BUT I WON'T BE LIKE YOU!
THE LETTERS CHANGE,
IT'S NOT LIKE LAST TIME!

BECAUSE NOW THEY SPELL

I HATE YOU!!!

(C) Bethanie Martell, 23rd jaunary 2005.

Copyright © xMizeriex ... [ 2005-02-05 16:57:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ''Refuse for the pain Wh*re part II...'' (User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 09:58:51 PM AEST
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very good...i feel the emotion and hate, i love the use of caps, not just cuz you used them, but how you did so.

Please keep it clean or you will be banned from site

ekk...well, i don know what was unclean, but from what i read it was pretty good...

Auryn

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