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From Angel's Wings (part one of the Seven series)
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Rxqueen
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Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 03:05:30 PM in AEST
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Superbia
"It was pride that changed angels into devils; it is humility that makes men as angels." -santiz Saint Augustine quotes
My transparency you see
revealing tainted flesh
so perfect I believe to be
realitydelusion slowly mesh
I know I am a delicacy
better then all the rest
vanity is fuming from me
in my own beauty I refresh
you may view here a tragedy
but I am consumed by haughtiness
I, a godess, a spawn from Angel's wings
fall I shall not for I am superior
respect me as a king
my pride never shall I lose
no matter the battle facing me
to even have the chance to walk in my shoes
you would blessed be
My punishment?
I care not
break me on the wheel
even in hell, fiery hot
lucifer will want a my deal
PRIDE...
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Re: From Angel's Wings (part one of the Seven series)
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by UnlovedChild on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 03:09:40 PM AEST
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| Wow Jocey!!! I love it. I was so caught in this poem. This is going to be a wonderful series. And this first one started you off extremely well! Great write and I CAN'T WAIT to read the rest!!! |
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Re: From Angel's Wings (part one of the Seven series)
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by pixie on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 03:13:48 PM AEST
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that was bloody amazing, I eagerly await the rest of them *hugs*
pix xx |
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Re: From Angel's Wings (part one of the Seven series)
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 03:44:29 PM AEST
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" Lucifer will want my deal " cahalenging the devil him self, love it, . . . u go girl . . . writen with pride
so who cares if it's a sin lol . . .
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Re: From Angel's Wings (part one of the Seven series)
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 03:46:16 PM AEST
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| if the devil could write like this, he'd sell his 2 u . . . |
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Re: From Angel's Wings (part one of the Seven series)
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 03:49:44 PM AEST
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Talking about his "Soul" dont't wanna upset the local inhabitants with miseterpitation, i mean just think of the letters he could write 2 god . . . lol . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: From Angel's Wings (part one of the Seven series)
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 06:42:07 PM AEST
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| pride goeth before a fall..this is going to be a great write..have you read the books? the 7 deadly sins? kinda scarey... that was the downfall of Satin I think..only he hasn't really had his final fall yet.. |
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Re: From Angel's Wings (part one of the Seven series)
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 08:59:54 PM AEST
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This is really awesome.
Scott |
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Re: From Angel's Wings (part one of the Seven series)
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 02:14:17 AM AEST
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My god that was just bloody brilliant, you have writen this so well and it's only the first part. And your using ilustrations too, i like it.
I, a godess, a spawn from Angel's wings
fall I shall not for I am superior
respect me as a king
I love those lines the best, they speak a lot of volumes.
Jane x |
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Re: From Angel's Wings (part one of the Seven series)
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by venkat on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 08:11:34 AM AEST
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| Brilliant work.. Enjoyed this read. Venkat |
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Re: From Angel's Wings (part one of the Seven series)
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:28:19 PM AEST
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You did good with these,
I was printing them out right away.
It looks like an exciting series.
hell ya, baby!
--Ghosty |
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Re: From Angel's Wings (part one of the Seven series)
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 05:19:35 PM AEST
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Woah...O_O
That blew me away Jocelyn.
I adore this.
I love the piece in italics, it is powerful and really stands out.
A stunning write hun,
I'll be reading more soon.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: From Angel's Wings (part one of the Seven series)
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by freckle on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:31:55 PM AEST
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| Great job on this one. I love how well you captured the spirit of Pride. Really, really good write. Gonna go read another one now! |
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