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Another Nail
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 01:33:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When we row in goes another nail,
Into our love the sharpness impales,
Strangling it to within an inch of death,
Leaving it alone with nothing else left.
Words like little iron shards of glass,
Their painful attack never to pass,
When we pull the nails out the scars are still there,
Plain to see the aftermath of the hurt we did share.
I hope over time these scars will heal,
That we can get back onto our even keel,
The wounds that have been made,
They were deep & they have stayed
Rowing did become a part of our relationship,
As if it was fed to us through a drip,
But not anymore as we are both really trying,
I never again wish to see you crying.
I pushed you to your limits although unintentional,
It made you see hurt three dimensional,
Your heart is sensitive of that I now know,
I hope in some time you’ll have no scars to show.
Copyright ©
pixie
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Re: Another Nail
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 01:39:38 PM AEST
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| vitamin e..takes away scars..and aloe..:-) |
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Re: Another Nail
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by subchild on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 01:56:26 PM AEST
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vERY IMPRESSIVE PIECE..I loved the flow and how you really seemed to get into it here..
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Re: Another Nail
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 02:15:18 PM AEST
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yes, I agree with subchild. I really loved this
Thanks for sharing |
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Re: Another Nail
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 02:23:51 PM AEST
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"I pushed you to your limits although unintentional,
It made you see hurt three dimensional,"
Wow. I mean - i don't think i've ever tried rhyming 'entionals' before - this is unique!
Thanks for the insp., Pix.
Keep writing. |
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Re: Another Nail
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 03:25:26 PM AEST
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a true decree of love, beautiful writting such a testament can only be from the heart . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Another Nail
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 05:26:23 PM AEST
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Wonderful piece you have here!
"Your heart is sensitive of that I now know,
I hope in some time you’ll have no scars to show."
Lovely way to end such an emotional write. |
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Re: Another Nail
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 08:51:15 PM AEST
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Very beautiful writing.
Scott |
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Re: Another Nail
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by venkat on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 08:03:57 AM AEST
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| Some extent dark..but so much love..glad to read you girl..hugs :-) venkat |
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