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Unknown Depression
Contributed by
alostcause
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Saturday, 20th July 2002 @ 03:33:54 PM in AEST
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It's like when your stuck in a hole you don't remember digging.
Waiting and waiting for the dirt to be shoveled back in on top of you.
The dirt comes now and you scream.
Everyone watching seems to be oblivious to your screams of fear.
You slowly start to drown in the dirt rising around you.
Then it starts to rain.
The dirt is turning to mud as your fear turns to panic.
Rising you drown in the earth and mud.
You have come to your susspensful death.
Dirt is still being shoveled in the hole intil the hole is filled with dirt once again.
After, noone knows that you are gone.
You are a vanished soul of the unknown past.
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alostcause
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Re: Unknown Depression
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by chatabox on
Saturday, 20th July 2002 @ 09:28:46 PM AEST
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| my goodness what deep poetry. I hope this isnt about you. If it is, remember you can be dragged back from the unknown past and helped to retrust and regain your spirits and be a master of your own destiny. |
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Re: Unknown Depression
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 21st July 2002 @ 02:01:25 PM AEST
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Hi, somehow you've described depression very well.. I'm not usually a depressed person, but lately, I've had some of those feelings. Thank you for sharing them.
Jenni |
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Re: Unknown Depression
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by cryingonmyporch on
Sunday, 21st July 2002 @ 02:13:19 PM AEST
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| Its nice I like it keep writing |
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Re: Unknown Depression
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by orgygirl on
Monday, 22nd July 2002 @ 05:12:43 AM AEST
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| well said! |
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Re: Unknown Depression
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by Bunty on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 06:13:31 PM AEST
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I've felt like that many times and you've captured it perfectly in words.
Remember though, that blood and tears will only help to drown you more |
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Re: Unknown Depression
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by Jacquelynne on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 10:53:57 AM AEST
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| I know exactly what this feels like... |
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