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The Sadist
Contributed by
b_rand
on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 08:38:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Feel the pain draining like rippling rain
Straining me down with no way to contain
Gaining, no doubt, it stays and remains
Carving these stains deep into my brain
Hardening my soul and taking control
I feel myself giving out under this pull
I'm fearing I might soon let everything go
Reality's leaving, my sanity holed.
Darkness embarks in a box underground
They buried me where there's no others around
No one can hear me, I don't make a sound
My only friend is my voice echoing loud
Perhaps this is good, for fear I have none
The screams and the dreams to me are just fun
And I don't disagree with what they have done
I was sharing the pain to draw happiness from
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b_rand
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2005-02-05 08:38:30] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Sadist
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 09:28:29 AM AEST (User
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Ohh that was madly brilliant, you might have over used the commas but overall the writing is brilliant.
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