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Hate This Place
Contributed by
LayDownPlayDead
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Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 11:15:00 PM in AEST
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I hate this place you call earth. I hate all these silly feelings, feelings of depression and despair. There's no love here for me, no hope waiting. In the abyss called my soul there's a hole I wish somebody could fill. I've tried and tried to replace the feelings of hate with love but how can I replace hate with love if all I know is hate. I wish I could find something, somebody to help me through it all. Somebody to talk to and share my tears with. But insted I don't cry, I can't. I can bleed, all alone in the dark the blood flows through my veins and out of the wounds I made for myself. The bruises, burns, and cuts are all I know of love. Won't you love me?
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Re: Hate This Place
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 11:20:08 PM AEST
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| how sad that you could feel this way, first you must love yourself and except yourself for who you are, life is to beautiful and to short for you to feel this way, I wish you all the peace through this holiday season, |
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Re: Hate This Place
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by KM on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 12:17:59 AM AEST
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I'm not going to comment on the poem but I will comment on the message conveyed.
You speak of "this place" as if it was someone elses and not your own and I can understand the alienation you feel but you're wrong. This place is just as much yours as anyone elses and you belong here as much as anyone else does. Just because everyone else is over there and you're not doesn't mean that they're right and you're wrong. That just makes you a willing victim of a huge and meaningless popularity contest. Don't fall for it... it's a lie! The lie needs victims in order to perpetuate itself. Without victims there is no bloated ego and no reason to continue with it. Be yourself and let the world know through your actions that it can ***** off if all you are is meat to be cut.
There's love here for anyone who wants it. All you have to do is rip away society's expectations and be whatever you would like to be... right now. It doesn't mean you have to be right for anyone else just you RIGHT NOW. It doesn't mean you can't change your mind later and it doesn't mean you are, or were, wrong about anything if you do. Do what thou wilt shall be the whole of the law!
Hate is a natural feeling and reaction for a healthy anyone to have when they feel they've been treated unjustly and abused either physically or emotionally. Look what happens... you can't let it out because it's not socially correct to do so and it cuts you up inside and out. Do something nice for Laydownplaydead and get away from anyone that makes you feel like this. Not everyone is like that.
There are more lonely and desperately sad people out there than you can shake a stick at and although you may not know it some of them probably need someone just like you even more than you need them. It's a matter of getting together which would have to be something really good for both right?! It would have to beat cutting.
It's your choice.
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Re: Hate This Place
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 01:23:12 AM AEST
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Gee i thought you were writing about me....this is what i feel like doing today that im having a hard time not doing is burning, cutting and punishing myself....seems like it's the only love i'll ever feel to....:(...
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Re: Hate This Place
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 05:24:14 PM AEST
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| s***, this is beautiful. it's so sad, its so so sad, i dont know what to say. I know exactly how you feel, exactly...but, all i can say is, its so hard, but it will get better...it's been 4 days now and i havent cut...it's so f****** hard, but it's possible...i know this time tomorro i will have cut, because im too weak to cope with it...but...if i can go 4 days without doing it, those four days are so worth it. do you see what im saying? please try for me, try and see my love for you and all of the others that have said something about your poem...yeah, the worlds f***** up, god doesnt love us, but the people that matter do, please try to see that |
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Re: Hate This Place
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by PerfectlyDead666 on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 09:28:45 PM AEST
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| I like this one but not as much as the others |
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