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Without a Good-bye
Contributed by
essentially9
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Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 12:42:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Without a Good-bye
You left without a good-bye
I never knew this would be the last time
That I would speak to you
And I don't know what to do
Because I didn't know
That you would go
I already miss you
And this day isn't even through
All I have are the memories
And from now on, that's all you'll be to me
All because you had to leave
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Re: Without a Good-bye
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 12:49:36 AM AEST (User
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Excellent write. I can definitely relate. Awesome work. |
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Re: Without a Good-bye
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jezabel on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 01:48:26 AM AEST (User
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so sad luv good write |
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Re: Without a Good-bye
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 04:12:36 AM AEST (User
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Very well writen, good ryming i liked the way you penned this.
Jane x |
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Re: Without a Good-bye
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 09:08:27 AM AEST (User
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Nice write E9, if this is written for afterdark, I feel the same way. Wish he didn't have to leave. |
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Re: Without a Good-bye
(User Rating: 1 ) by subchild on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 10:11:34 AM AEST (User
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Very good heart felt write..I am sure He would like it very much.. |
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