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Let Go

Contributed by Tobe on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 12:36:41 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

As I am sitting in my bedroom thinking of you
I wonder what I should do?
Whether I should hold on?
Or just let go and pretend your gone?

As I am sitting in my bedroom with nothing
I wonder if there is ever going to be something
Something that will stop me feeling the way I do about you
Something that will stop me feeling so out of view

As I am sitting in my bedroom
Wishing I could just leave this behind
Wishing I could do things my way
I hope that I never drift and die
I hope that I can change my fate

As I am sitting in my bedroom thinking of you
I wonder what I should do?
Whether I should hold on?
Or just let go and pretend your gone?

As I am just about to talk to you
You walk away without a clue
Do you even notice me at all?
I would pick you up when you fall

As I am just about to enter your view
You turn away to meet someone new
Do you even notice that I exist?
Should I stay and persist?

As I am sitting in my bedroom thinking of you
I wonder what I should do?
Whether I should hold on?
Or just let go and pretend your gone?

As I am just about to ask you how you are today?
You see someone from far away
You go over to see who it is
And leave me to rethink this

Should I hold on?
Or just let go and pretend your gone?

I think it is time for me to say my goodbyes
So I never again see your beautiful eyes
I think it is time that I let you know
That I must let you go

Copyright © Tobe ... [ 2005-02-05 00:36:41]
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