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candycane flush with the walkway
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 12:36:07 AM in AEST
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candycane flush with the walkway
_____________________________
surely as the sun rises and falls,
this family of poets, within this earthly world,
needs your voice, longs to read you,
would it do any good if we
beg, whine and plead?
even need?
you
location: in front of your puter
occupation: mum n' author, dearest friend
signature: 'i reached for sleep and drew it round me like a blanket,
muffling pain and thought together in the merciful dark...'
country: australia
~*~
sometimes we forget who we are
life gets wanky, just where do we belong?
it's a heartfelt genuine feeling, when you're reeling,
that's the time to remember who loves you for you
believes in the gifted shining star you are,
~*~
when alone and walking down the street
i know you still feel that poetic pull and beat,
it is your soul, its crying to be free, my friend
and still, always i have this shoulder to lend,
please stop in your tracks, turn around and think,
~*~
what element to refresh your ink?
what sort of musefood, and treats and such?
we miss you, you know, love you so very much!
we want to share what you believe, know and feel
let go of past sorrows it is a new day,
~*~
a journal awaits for simple sanity
quietly, ever, a soliloquy of reason,
then there's always that tv, music and art,
you know the daisychain runs true
hey hey, jan, its time to start anew,
~*~
so dear lady, way downunder, in that beautiful
world of roos, in the land of the midnight sun
morningtime again; kukas sing, time to right life's season
so this lill poem is to maybe help find your way
we belong here for the very same reason...
~*~
i cannot beg, plead or whine to
make you share your poetry again,
you must believe in the fact your writing
is devine, without you ypdc's not the same,
just a candycane flush with the walkway.
§* *§
*|*
for poetry is the blossom and the fragrance of all human knowledge, human thoughts, human passions, emotions, language. ~coleridge
the only reason for being a professional writer is that you can't help it. ~leo rosten
hopefully inspiration for one of my longtime dearest ypdc friends, with huggles, big love, n' poetry 4ever; i miss you, remember you're ever the ~*::dreamweaver::*~
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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Re: candycane flush with the walkway
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by silent on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 01:20:11 AM AEST
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| Wow that's good. If she is gone that sucks because she is so very talented and can conjure up so much imagry in her writings. :( |
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by SocialMisfit on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 01:39:16 AM AEST
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this is cool i like the how the music ,poem and picture flow together to give a total sensory envelopment in this write.
SM |
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 02:18:38 AM AEST
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Wow that was just brilliant writing. This is really incredible and powerfull. You have writen this so well. Much love.
Jane x |
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Re: candycane flush with the walkway
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by venkat on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 03:00:23 AM AEST
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I totally agree with you Nessa, really our hearts feel poetic pull and beat..truly divine poetry I read from you both my friends..I wish that our friend should continue to write..
God bless...hugs for writing this poem.:-) venkat |
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Re: candycane flush with the walkway
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 05:39:28 AM AEST
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| Oh Nessa, what can I say? When you read something like this and see the amount of love that's in people's hearts, it just takes your breath away. Thank you so much for caring about me. I'm truly speechless at your beautiful words. Thank you dear friend from the bottom of my heart ... Jan |
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Re: candycane flush with the walkway
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by Stalkee on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 12:00:50 PM AEST
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| gollee, now that was just excellent writing, every line and every word was great...the flow was perfect...everything was excellent...just excellent |
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Re: candycane flush with the walkway
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 07:09:57 PM AEST
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beautiful peice of poetic writting, ty 4 sharing this with us . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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by tifrob on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 12:57:45 AM AEST
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Nessa, that poem was wonderful. You're a talent to be reconed with...
J~ |
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Re: candycane flush with the walkway
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by xrockstheheart on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 01:02:14 AM AEST
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| well you do have a magic pen and you do have a way with words. but as you know i've always liked your poetry. I've read a lot of poems today and still yours is one of the best. later |
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Re: candycane flush with the walkway
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 04:36:35 AM AEST
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Very good write.
i do hope she's back or comes back.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: candycane flush with the walkway
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 02:39:55 AM AEST
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An amazing piece Nessa.
johnny. |
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by BrandySwanson on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 02:28:01 AM AEST
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Wow I loved the music it went so perfect with the poem. It was so beautiful loved and enjoyed it. And I want to ty for leaving that sweet comment in Mick's poem it was so sweet again thank you.
Brandy |
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 04:20:58 AM AEST
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*Grumbles cos I know i've read this one three times and didn't get 'round to commenting once*
Its a very beautiful poem darlin, its written to perfection, as always, and it flows wonderfully. In itself, its a wonderful tribute and the music is lovely. Excellent m'dear.
Hugs 'n Love
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 10:27:42 AM AEST
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This is just gorgeous, Nessa. There is no other way to describe it.
You are such a lovely friend to people. This shows that.
Amazing poem, once again.
Much love to you,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 12:58:54 PM AEST
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| Wow a truely amazing piece of writting I agree with the poster who said the music is very fitting... superb! |
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by Archie on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:27:11 PM AEST
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A very encouraging write. An appropriate poem since I just renewed my membership for another year.
If I make as a musician I will have to change how I post though, but I promise to strive to keep in touch for those who need encouragement and inspiration. |
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by Aquaelius on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 08:48:58 PM AEST
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I can only hope someone will miss me just as much if I ever leave. Makes me miss her too.
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Re: candycane flush with the walkway
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by colinb on
Monday, 14th July 2014 @ 04:24:33 PM AEST
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| your talent has no bounds |
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