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Without You

Contributed by Tobe on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 12:33:37 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Without you I don't know what to do
Without you I can't go on living my life
Without you I am so confused
Without you I can't open up my mind

If you are not with me I don't know how to cope
I don't think I will ever be able to hope
If you are not by my side I think I'll cry
I don't even think I'll have a reason to open my eyes

I wish you could see my hurt
So you could try and heal the bother of my scars
I wish you would be my girl
So you know that I love you from the bottom of my heart

Without you I don't know what to do
Without you I can't go on living my life
Without you I am so confused
Without you I can't open up my eyes

If you are not with me I don't know how to enjoy life
I don't think I will ever be able to look you in the eye
If you are not by my side I think I'll die
I don't even think I'll have a reason to stay alive

I wish you could see my tears
So you could try and help me overcome my fears
I wish you would be the one
To show me that I no longer have to run

Without you I don't know what to do
Without you I can't go on living my life
Without you I am so confused
Without you I can't go on in time

If you are not with me I don't know how to believe
I don't think I will ever be able to succeed
If you are not by my side I think I'll take my life
I don't even think I'll have a reason to survive

I wish you could hear my thoughts
So you could believe that...
How I feel about you isn't false
And was from the start
And truly from my heart
I wish you would see my devotion
So you know that I love you...
Even if you play with my emotions

Copyright © Tobe ... [ 2005-02-05 00:33:37]
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Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 05:24:39 AM AEST
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What an exceptional write, so emotional and powerfull you have writen this so well.

Jane x

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