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The Missing Piece to My Soul
Contributed by
vanilla_flame
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Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 09:58:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
Tributes
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You owned the drive-in outside of town,
Giving kids tootsie-rolls as the parents
paid admission.
Why did you have to leave?
I look on the bright side:
Your with your parents
safe and sound up above.
Your always with me now
in my heart and watching
me from the clouds.
I see the bad things:
The only time I ever seen
your caring face
was when we went to the drive-in
on the summer nights.
I never spent a Christmas with you.
A few weeks short of that holiday,
you left me.
I didn't know a thing about you
but I looked up to you,
proud to be related.
I ask God:
Please don't take his sisters
I still need the love from a Grandma
and the caring smile from a Great Aunt.
Velma's time is very near
but I dont' care
Don't take her away
It's just too soon.
Whenever I take off
a wrapper that of a tootsie-roll
I think of you..
When my time comes
I'll be expecting a hug from you :D
Until we meet again
I love you and
miss you forever and a day...
A Special Tribute to the very loved and missed Harvey Fast. Harvey passed away peacefully on December 8th.
p.s. I haven't had time to edit this, so any suggestions would be greatly appreciated!!
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Re: The Missing Piece to My Soul
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by cherrycoke on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 10:20:33 PM AEST
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| That is a very touching poem you've written. The imagery is great .. i was able to picture each word in my head as i read them. great job .. i wish i could be descriptive like that. |
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Re: The Missing Piece to My Soul
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 01:35:29 AM AEST
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when we loose someone in death they live in our hearts and as long as their name is whispered upon our lips they live on, just my thoughts, beautiful tribute, im sorry for your loss.... hugs n' love nessa
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