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Nothing To Blame
Contributed by
cocacola1331
on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 08:32:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Can you blame me for leaving this world?
I can't deny this pain any longer....
I'm saying goodbye,
This is for real
Listen to me
And remember all I say,
I hope you have a
Great life,
Better than mine was.
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2005-02-04 20:32:02]
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Re: Nothing To Blame
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by Arsenic on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 08:36:25 PM AEST
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| I really like the first half. The second part “And remember all I say, I hope you have a Great life, Better than mine was.” Didn’t flow the same. Compared to most of the farewell poems, this one is very short and to the point. Very poetic, so to speak. Good job. |
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Re: Nothing To Blame
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by Scarlett on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 06:40:16 AM AEST
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| i liked this too but hope it wasn't for real. |
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