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Love is an illusion
Contributed by
setting_in_the_sun
on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 08:17:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tears like rain, fall silent,
pain burns through like sun.
Life is quick ask the morning glory,
ever growing loving than it's gone.
Sweet surrender to your kiss?
You played me like a fool.
I fumbled around to find my sanity,
than slowly got back on my feet.
Love it seems like it's an illusion,
run for it and it disapeers,
And I'm left in disappointment;
with no one to dry the tears.
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2005-02-04 20:17:10]
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Re: Love is an illusion
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 12:23:59 AM AEST
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| What a sad and moving write. I really liked the last stanza. |
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Re: Love is an illusion
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 01:21:52 AM AEST
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this is beautiful..... hugs n' love nessa
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