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Crystal Tears!!!
Contributed by
stacey
on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 07:07:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As the dying petals of a crimson rose
She silently falls from the dark skies
Unaware of how she got here
To a cruel shadowy realm of lies.
She tries to stand but her stength is drained
Immortal beings creeping and drawing near
Screaming she stuggles with all her might
Trying to avoid what she mostly fears.
One holds an axe above her head
Laying still she awaits her demise
Clueless and confused on why she must suffer
Soflty crystal tears she cries.
The ground accepts her with open arms
Hoping soon she'd leave her fears
Lying silently in her pool of crimson
She once again cries crystal tears.
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stacey
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2005-02-04 19:07:26]
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Re: Crystal Tears!!!
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 07:22:44 PM AEST
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To a cruel shadowy realm of lies.
that is my favoreite line...i really like this poem...great job!
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Re: Crystal Tears!!!
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by Alina on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 09:23:12 PM AEST
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" Softly crystal tears she cries..." great imagery. You did a wonderful job on this poem.
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