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Short Breaths of Death
Contributed by
kellros
on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 06:45:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Yelling for the mourning of shadows,
cries from a cold dead room,
where plants wither and die
as life awaits its doom
The smell of rot decays the senses
and the sight of darkness numbs the skin
as the silent whispers kill your hearing
nothingness consumes your mind of sin.
Clouds run across the skies
to darken the day,
the wind cries of his endless journey
with the clouds to form a cold winter dying day.
Your soul slowly dies
with every breath
your past slowly rots
with every death
your future slowly decays
with every step
until you end up in the grip of death...
If you dont live for something, you'll die for nothing
Copyright ©
kellros
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2005-02-04 18:45:35]
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Re: Short Breaths of Death
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 06:53:48 PM AEST
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'nothingness consumes your mind of sin'
very good. nice form to it. i like the way the last bit & the end is.
good rhyming, nice use of words. overall, great poem.
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Re: Short Breaths of Death
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by Stacey on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 07:11:56 PM AEST
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hey stacey here i really liked your poem. what you said in the last line is true if you don't live for something you'll die for nothing. i think people should quit worrying about useless things and enjoy life because you just may only live once.
luv ya
stacey. |
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