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Is It Taking Over Our Lives?
Contributed by
kipzi21101
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Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 05:10:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I'm not fat,
But I'm not thin,
But whatever shape I am,
I just can't win
I pig out on chocolate,
When I'm in the mood,
But I've had enough,
I'm giving up food.
I hate my body shape,
It makes my tears fall,
But I'm going to the extreams,
Just to be small.
I've tried once before,
Though I didn't suceed,
But this time when I'm hungry,
I'm not going to feed.
The models we see,
As thin as a stick,
But what about the girls,
Who make themselves sick?
I cry in my bed,
I think im overweight,
But my body is fine,
Although this doesn't decrease my hate
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2005-02-04 17:10:38]
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Re: Is It Taking Over Our Lives?
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by emystar on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 05:14:49 PM AEST
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this is very sad.
it's not the weight it's what's in the heart that counts.
Don't worry 'bout the outward appearence that makes a person.
hang in there.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Is It Taking Over Our Lives?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 05:25:18 PM AEST
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| Having met one true anorexic (in a hospital) I can say that this is truely sad. This was a nice reflection of what they feel. Blessings. |
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Re: Is It Taking Over Our Lives?
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by lilschizoboy07 on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 07:29:54 PM AEST
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| The flo is nice and it kinda hits home. Hope to see more, newbie.:) |
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Re: Is It Taking Over Our Lives?
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by Kazzy1231 on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 12:36:47 PM AEST
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| Good poem. |
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