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CONVERSATION
Contributed by
bibi
on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 05:09:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I heard a conversation
from the table by my side
She spoke of all the pain he caused
and how much he had lied
I wondered for a moment
I thought how could this be
This lady I had never met
had a story just like me
The sadness in her voice
made a tear roll down my cheek
Her freind so understanding
as answers she did seek
How could this love she cherished
turn out to be a farce
Her life would never be the same
for he had broke her heart
I turned and looked around
I needed just a glance
To see this one whose story
seemed so like mine perchance
Much to my astonishment
I began to understand
The reason for our sadness
We both shared the same man
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bibi
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2005-02-04 17:09:02]
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Re: CONVERSATION
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 07:21:20 PM AEST
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Whew! Surprised no one else has commented. Yeah, it's often the same men go off to do it again, isn't it? Sad. But you made a really good story-poem out of it.
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Re: CONVERSATION
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by kylie on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 09:56:35 AM AEST
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| WOW I ABOUT FELL OF MY CHAIR ON THAT LAST LINE. VERY WELL WRITTEN. IT IS ORIGINAL. VERY VERY GOOD! |
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