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Darkness to Light!!!
Contributed by
stacey
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Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 04:49:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Arise from the darkness, step into the light
Never have I seen such a wonderful sight
Hidden in the depth of my fears and hate
Always thought life would decide my fate.
How I thought that I would truly regret
My own goals are the ones I would set
Seeking inside each and every passing hour
Facing my darkness has given me power.
Nothing is right and none is wrong
Accepting life and where I belong
My time in this world may not forever last
Put aside my fears there a vision in the past.
Copyright ©
stacey
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2005-02-04 16:49:43] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Darkness to Light!!!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 05:03:16 PM AEST (User
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Nicely composed. Picture of shouldering your burdens and continuing down the path anyway. Blessings. |
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Re: Darkness to Light!!!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Quilted_rag_doll on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 07:23:13 PM AEST (User
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'Facing my darkness has given me power'
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'Accepting life and where I belong'
those are my two fave lines...this is a great poem...not too long, good rhyming, nice word use, some very good lines...
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Re: Darkness to Light!!!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 05:05:18 PM AEST (User
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This is a beautiful poem. Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Darkness to Light!!!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 05:05:22 PM AEST (User
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This is a beautiful poem. Keep up the good work! |
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