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Empty heart
Contributed by
blackrose233
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Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 04:46:44 PM in AEST
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There were tears in your eyes as we said are good byes
were your tears just lie’s, lies that eat away at my very soul tarring me apart breaking my heart
what should I do what shall I say to make you come back today
I said good bye twas a lie I never wanted you to go I still love you very much so,
you don’t seem to care love is so not fair
why lie and say you love me when you really don’t
I thought my hearts feelings were real in the end I was deceived but sill I go
still I walk with my still beating broken heart in my chest and tears rolling down my face
I press on because I must be strong.
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blackrose233
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2005-02-04 16:46:44]
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Re: Empty heart
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 04:51:42 PM AEST
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| I can feel the emotion that comes off of these words...great expression! |
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Re: Empty heart
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by Stacey on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 05:01:48 PM AEST
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hey i'm stacey i really loved it. could almost feel the emotion. keep it up!!!
luv ya tunz
stacey |
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