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Tears
Contributed by
Mandy2007
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Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 04:14:44 PM in AEST
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Tears
Today report cards came, I did not fail the semester like I thought. I should be happy, but what I should be, and what I am, are two different things. I’ve been down for a while now. No more coffee to sell or wraps to eat. No more time to laugh, and have fun. Take my mind off bad things, I can no longer. Now I must deal I can’t go for a hug or write a note to be read. Now I must stare out a window, watch the scene on the other side get blurred away by my own tears. All my worries I must deal with alone. Small ones such as picking a song to audition with, or big ones like rather or not to move on. Why did God deal all this on me? I’m only 16, I shouldn’t be dealing with a father like mine. All I do is cry. But I know crying won’t solve anything, only one thing will.
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Re: Tears
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by eulo440 on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 04:31:01 PM AEST
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| I like the poem...only thing is you have the word rather in there...maybe it should be weather instead |
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Re: Tears
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by bibi on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 05:17:51 PM AEST
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| sometimes life may not seem fair but in the long run all those tears of sadness can turn into tears of joy |
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Re: Tears
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by wolfman on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 03:58:44 PM AEST
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dont feel down on your self you are a good person, so what if your not a perfict student very few people are, yes life may be tough atr this moment but it will pass not quick or easy but it will pass all the same, just be strong and keep faith God will help you, and so will we.
this is a very heart felt emotionaly strong poem, I feel your sadness and can in some ways relate I to wasnt good in school but even if I did pass I was still upset because I knew what was going to happen when I got home, all the taking and questions that I just didnt want to deal with at that time. but any way, this was a good one, a little short, but still good, I do hope to read more of your writings so. be strong and God bless.
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Re: Tears
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by heartbroken4ever on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 08:54:05 PM AEST
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I like it It inspirise me to write more
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Re: Tears
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 11:08:29 PM AEST
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This is a very heart felt poem here. I can relate. You will over come what you are going through and when you do, you will be able to help others. That could be why God is letting these things happen. So you can help others who are going through what you are going through. I hope things get better for you.
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Re: Tears
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 12:46:17 AM AEST
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| awesome, well done |
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