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One Worded Theory
Contributed by
Shattered_Angel
on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 09:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I hold my books tight, hurry to class
Avoiding.
All the eyes of those who see me
Unrewarding.
My head down to the shady ground
Decieving.
People don't see me, walk through me
Believing.
No one hears my unstable steps
Echoing.
They don't hear my weary plea
Beckoning.
They hear an unoticed soul
Bellowing.
Step over my broken body
Wallowing.
Wallowing.
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Shattered_Angel
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2002-12-09 21:15:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: One Worded Theory
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 09:21:09 PM AEST (User
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This is different...it's unique in it's own way and has a style of it's own, thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it...Keep em' coming...
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Re: One Worded Theory
(User Rating: 1 ) by nomad on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 08:16:00 PM AEST (User
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Shattered Angel, this is a wonderful piece. So sad, though. You are clearly an insightful and deep person. I do hope your pain soon leaves you. |
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