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I Will Find You
Contributed by
avanottingham
on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 02:54:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I don't believe it
I'm sure I heard them wrong
'Cause I still see your face
Here where you are strong
But you were bleeding
And you were all alone
I know that you tried
But I can't let you go
I will find you
And I will bring you home
'Cause I can't live life crying
And I don't want to know
A world without you
When you meant everything
Within our darkest hour
Will you rescue me?
They don't believe it
I hear you call to me
I feel you shine your love upon me
Forcing me to breathe
I swear I'll find you
I swear I'll bring you home
Because nothing stands between us
This love is all I know
A world inside of me
Where you mean everything
Within our darkest hour
You have rescued me
I have this part of you
A part that never leaves
In my heart where you are strongest
You will live eternally
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avanottingham
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Re: I Will Find You
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 03:05:24 PM AEST (User
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very deep poem, I hope that you do find the person you are looking for one day
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Re: I Will Find You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kay-Kay on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 03:29:14 PM AEST (User
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wow i really love this poem cuz this is the writing syle that i use in most of my poems. this is a very great write i like how you make sense with all of your lines. Keep the poems coming!
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Re: I Will Find You
(User Rating: 1 ) by avanottingham on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 05:47:03 PM AEST (User
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Actually, I wrote the poem because of a dream I had.
The dream consisted of someone I loved dearly having died from the start of the dream, and I spent the rest of it searching for a piece of him. In the end of it I found a lock of hair, something of him left on this earth. I shouldn't have categorized it as "Lost Love" because the point was I never really lost him.
But thank you for your kind words. I'll take the intentions to heart =)
~ava
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