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sunken with love bites
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 01:55:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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baby please
i love you listen
i know you like to touch
but enough is enough
i feel like its a test
i feel ready
but part of me ashamed
if i wont will you leave
i believe in romance
but is this really love?
im sunken under
i feel like im a toy
to use and abuse
to chew on when bored
love bites all over me
scars around by body
my skin marked by you
not pure anymore
iam not new
i have been used
that's how it feels
under these eyes lies a sunken soul
my body a playtoy
not for my enjoyment yours
im getting used and abused
sunken with love bites
i lay back down
the night gone
the smell of you lingering...
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Hannah_Heaven
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2005-02-04 13:55:05]
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Re: sunken with love bites
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 07:31:02 PM AEST
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not too much form to it...much emotion though...kinda sad how some people use others that way. love bits...kinda says more then one thing there...nice job..
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Re: sunken with love bites
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 02:04:06 PM AEST
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love sux
awesome poem...so much emotion...so much to say
great write
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