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Let Me Out
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 01:26:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Knock, knock do you know I am here?
I have been locked away not allowed to appear,
I was banished never to see the light of day,
I was locked, locked far away.
I have lay banging on the walls,
All the while I thought someone would hear my call,
I was suffocating in my despair,
All I needed was for somebody to be there.
I shouted until my lungs started to bleed,
Darkness was killing me at a tremendous speed,
I screamed & I banged until I could no more,
My body lay broken & abused on the floor.
My hands were sore & covered in blood,
For my survival it didn’t look good,
Please just open the lid let me go,
My insides have suffered a terrible blow.
I have lived in this prison it has been my home,
Living in fear & I’ve lived so alone,
I promise if you let me out I will soon become well,
Please let me out of my desperate hell.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-02-04 13:26:02]
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Re: Let Me Out
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by afterdark on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 01:31:53 PM AEST
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| Your talent shines in this poem..I really liked it quite alot.. |
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Re: Let Me Out
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by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 01:39:46 PM AEST
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| awww...gimmme a happy poem before I go on Monday Pix.. |
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Re: Let Me Out
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by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 02:22:49 PM AEST
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Krissie this is such a sad poem i dont know whats happening but if you ever need to talk i am always here, no questions asked ill always be here. Like always your writing shines and this is just a outstanding.
*Hugs*
Jane xx |
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Re: Let Me Out
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by emystar on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 02:29:45 PM AEST
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A masterpeice.
Hang in there my friend as joy cometh in the morning.
I can so relate to this write in a big way.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Let Me Out
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 06:15:29 PM AEST
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verry nice poem pixie sad but just hang in there . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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