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Sweet Dreams
Contributed by
kailadragon
on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 11:18:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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through the darkness
a face emerges
the evil runs
and through it, purges
a bony hand
all caked in dust
pushes terror
with a thrust
screaming skulls
and dying gasps
a deathly cold
like an asp
a reaper's kiss
a dead embrace
dripping blood
from a shattered face
a jumping form
from your bead
you're lying there
rotting dead
a flitting thought
gone away
did you ever know
death is gray
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2005-02-04 11:18:41]
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Re: Sweet Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 11:23:51 AM AEST
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| "[A] flitting thought gone away" is a good line. I guess we all are flitting thoughts compared to the rest of the universe. Made me think. Cheers! |
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Re: Sweet Dreams
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by jillian_phan on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 12:04:04 PM AEST
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| that was good, it flowed evenly... |
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Re: Sweet Dreams
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by evilcherry312 on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 01:10:02 PM AEST
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This really struck me. Good visuals, and honestly made me think about what you were trying to say. Good job!
~your evil cherry |
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Re: Sweet Dreams
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by pixie on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 02:05:01 PM AEST
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very good, great flow
pix xx |
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Re: Sweet Dreams
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by Solmyr1404 on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 01:20:54 PM AEST
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| spooky....but, um, how many times have you gotten on my case for writing stuff like that?....hmm?....but it was good.... |
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Re: Sweet Dreams
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 02:14:21 PM AEST
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death is gray
i never thought aboutit like that
instead of death being either
black or white( good or bad )
you saying that its gray
is so very true
nice write
-->Rae |
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