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My Secret
Contributed by
HiDdEnTEARS
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Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:12:33 PM in AEST
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Let me let you in on my secret,
something I’m hiding inside.
The things I so timidly shadow,
I’ve found I can no longer hide.
I hate being around you,
I can not stand the feeling.
Knowing I can’t have you,
makes the tears I keep concealing.
But being away too long,
hurts way too much to explain.
The way my heart thrives for your voice,
driving me insane.
The ceaseless pain of wondering,
never declining to remain.
The possibilities, tugging, pulling,
ripping up my fragile brain.
I wish you could understand,
the pain I continuously sever,
as I predict that I will fail,
every unavailing endeavour.
So let me let you in,
on these feelings that stab at my heart,
because day by day and night by night,
they’re tearing me apart.
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HiDdEnTEARS
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2005-02-03 23:12:33]
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Re: My Secret
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by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:37:47 PM AEST
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Yes.. I had the same problem,(with a girl though)... But truthfully once I did get the courage to tell her how I felt, It changed, Not for the better not for the worse, somewhere in between both, Kinda unexplainable really
"I have feeling for you too , but I just want to be freinds for now"... Is the way she put it, Ne ways Good write, :) |
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Re: My Secret
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by O7NeVeS on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 12:08:11 AM AEST
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| What a great write...I can definitely relate. I too voiced my feelings and like foreveralone said, ur left at an unexplainable place. I can't even explain what i'm tryin to say. Anyways thanks for sharing and Good Luck!! TD |
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