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The Shaded World of Grey
Contributed by
XxNights_ChildxX
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Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:01:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Now caught in this world, between wrong and right,
Stuck in a vision somewhere, amongst day and night,
Can't quite decifer, to choose evil or good,
And would I choose a path, even if I could?
I can't figure out, wether to love or hate,
No matter what my decision, things never turn out great,
I feel the darkness crawling, once again at the door,
But I turn myself away from that evil once more,
It seems that everythings perfect, but somethings just not right,
And it's blinding me from happiness, as it keeps my hidden sight,
It's poisonous and toxic, like a love based on abuse,
And for this future fate, I just have no use,
I refuse to wallow, in that sadness that I see,
And it will only make me stronger, by being set free,
But now I am stuck, here in this dimension,
The paradox of the mind is only an invention,
Soon I will break free and see the light of a new day,
But for now I remain inbetween black and white, in the shaded world of grey.
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Re: The Shaded World of Grey
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 07:44:42 PM AEST
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'I remain inbetween black and white, in the shaded world of grey.'
i really love the way you ended it. very nice line, tying into the title. great job at rhyming, and form. very good poem..keep it up...
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Re: The Shaded World of Grey
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by eden on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 03:56:18 PM AEST
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this is by far my favourite of the three i read, because i like how you put it. I think i know what you need Jenni, freedom. I think that if you can master getting this while still maintaining your relationships and the rest of your life, that you would be much happier. What I mean is that I think you need to find something to channel your freedom into.
Thats Alicia's advice anyways, ill shut up now
love ya
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