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Wonderfull You

Contributed by patch81 on Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 08:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Strange... how it... Feels inside...
Strange... How you... made it so right... love
Trust me...with those...Smashing eyes of yours
And I'll do... anything... everything to... ohh
Sitting... thinking... Trying to get by
And in this... moment...ohh... Ibegin to fly,
Wonderfull baby,
I want you to see....ohh
Me... God I... Want you so badly...
And I'll wonder this,
Could the next day be...
So wonderfull,
As you.... there... seeking...
Let go... Of your... fears of me...
And watch our... love rise... and fill our souls up...
And take us... time to... Get what we want
Yeah...
Im crazy.. for thinking... Just knowing you couldnt be found...
Im here... Im prancing all around...
Am i feeling so right... or right my feelings are
and am I... Free... Or am i just dreaming
Wonderfull baby... Can you just see... Please ohh
Dont forget me... PLease no...
I promsie you...
Lying right here... with the love i see...
Eachday.... the more... I... miss...you...
Im crazy.. for thinking... Just knowing you couldnt be found...
Im here... Im prancing all around...
Am i feeling so right... or right my feelings are
and am I... Free... Or am i just dreaming...
Wonderfull baby... I would treat you Great...ly...
Smother you.... i mean trust me...
And it's times like this.... When i think of these...
Feelings... You know... on how... I... miss... you...
Take time... some time.... baby.....
Im crazy.. for thinking... Just knowing you couldnt be found...
Im here... Im prancing all around...
Am i feeling so right... or right my feelings are
To each other... We will be tasting... my love our love...
We'll smother out the pain we had found...
You know i... I mean to tell you all the things Im feeling...
Deep inside im afraid... Each day... the more I... miss... you...
Trust me... Just once... Hunny...
So much.... You have.... To give that love...
That i would give you back again and again.... ohh...Good Lord... Many nights i would hold you..
But please... please... remember me always.





Copyright © patch81 ... [ 2002-12-09 08:30:00]
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Re: Wonderfull You (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 09:28:57 AM AEST
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She is a true Christian,she will come around dont loose faith! Christina


Re: Wonderfull You (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 10:36:46 AM AEST
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This is so beautifully written...i hope she see's this....this seems like a hard situation to be in but if the love is there it'll be to hard to walk away....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: Wonderfull You (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 03:19:12 PM AEST
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Hey, this was alrite I found it very hard to read though with all the ... things. I'm sure you'll get your girl... good luck!

- Bobo (Joel)


Re: Wonderfull You (User Rating: 1 )
by Patch81 on Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 05:18:17 PM AEST
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Im sorry, the thing is i used them as pauses. So you would pause after saying them. It's hard writing a song and just letting people read it without hearing the une that goes with it. But thanks for the comment


Re: Wonderfull You (User Rating: 1 )
by Elisabeth on Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 10:18:06 PM AEST
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I really dig your poem. No, I'm not a hippie...it's just that I tried to read it as though it were given to me, and it seemed to work. I got the chills when I read this poem. I understood the ...things to be pauses. I'm sure she is really liking it to, but just from the sound of your poem, it seems like it's more lust than anything. With that, I see why she doesn't want to date/be with you because you're not Christian. Anyway, best of luck to you and your dream girl.


Re: Wonderfull You (User Rating: 1 )
by Sarah22 on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 01:29:26 AM AEST
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neat poem :*)




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