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Ofuscated Bliss
Contributed by
Candy_Dirtbag
on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:32:18 PM in AEST
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Blink away these blackened tears;
while the bloody stream finally clears.
Fight with the pain and anger;
only to realize there is no danger.
Shadow the joy inside;
just don't let the rage reside.
Always know that you're happy;
just pretend to be sappy.
Don't let that bright smile show;
unless you're ready to let go.
Manicly frown and scream;
only dance blissfully in your dream.
Just act with the rage;
but, on the inside, you're really sage.
You know the happiness is missed;
but remember, it's ofuscated bliss.
12-8-04
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Candy_Dirtbag
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2005-02-03 22:32:18]
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Re: Ofuscated Bliss
(User Rating: 1 )
by SimplyMe on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 05:56:52 PM AEST
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This is not a bad write =P In fact i think this is one of my favorites.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: Ofuscated Bliss
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by lilschizoboy07 on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 08:21:32 PM AEST
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| I agree with luci 8P this isn't bad. Admittedly not the best from you I've seen, but still pretty good. It was the title that hooked me into reading it. |
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