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Guilty Conscience
Contributed by
cherrycoke
on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:06:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This secret deep inside of me
Is eating away at my soul
Slowly and painfully, piece by piece
Until there's nothing left of me
Emotions, uncontrollable
Can't turn them on, can't turn them off
I'm losing this grip on what I thought was reality
Soon I'll end up alone
Insanity's got hold of me
And tightening its grip
Eternal bruising on my sense of being
Can't remember who I am
This pen, collecting thoughts itself
Is going on forever
Can't stop the writing, nor the fear
That's hiding in my core
War and fighting, contradiction
On and on, it's never-ending
Can't lay my guilty soul to peace
Regret is my best friend
Copyright ©
cherrycoke
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2005-02-03 22:06:25]
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Re: Guilty Conscience
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by freckle on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:23:03 PM AEST
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| Great poem...I love the last line! Keep sharing! |
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Re: Guilty Conscience
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by absentangel69 on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:35:27 PM AEST
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| wow your my idol...i like your feelings babe good i love it |
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Re: Guilty Conscience
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by vanilla_flame on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 10:31:22 PM AEST
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Wow, this is e.x.a.c.t.l.y ( :D) how I feel, I wrote a poem on this too. Hey if you ever need someone to talk to who's going thru somthin simalr, I'm always here! :D
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Re: Guilty Conscience
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by evilcherry312 on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 06:54:48 PM AEST
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this was really good. your style is intresting, and i like it a lot. i've felt these same feeling before, but i don't really know why i've never chosen to write about them. thanks for your comment, too.
~your evil cherry
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Re: Guilty Conscience
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by _myonlyone_ on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 08:11:06 PM AEST
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another good one... keep them coming.
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