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Rain of Fire
Contributed by
Leviticus
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Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:24:29 PM in AEST
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They did not deserve this fate, no one does. First their homes, then there beloved children, then finally them, they all suffered from the same fate. It came so swiftly that none had even the smallest fragment of time to prepare. But, even if they were ready, nothing could have saved them.
A rain of fire and sulfur came from the heavens. There was no source, it just fell. It destroyed everything in its path, more destructive than a tornado, more destructive than a hurricane. Nothing of the sort had ever happened, but now their fate was sealed. Their monuments to the great kings of old were gone in one massive strike.
It was never expected, it was never anticipated. This blanket of destruction was just unleashed upon this world. There was no mortal reason for this tragedy to take place. The only reason that existed was in the mind of a deity, located high into the heavens. There was no feeling of remorse in the eyes of this deity. His own people, the ones whom he had created, became heretics. They killed his only faithful servant…themselves.
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Re: Rain of Fire
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:51:16 PM AEST
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Certainly interesting. Gotta wonder if you've read the Left Behind series. I look forward to more of your stuff.
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Re: Rain of Fire
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by Twitch06 on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:51:53 PM AEST
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very very good, i enjoyed it :)
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Re: Rain of Fire
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by absentangel69 on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:49:27 PM AEST
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| wow just wow...there;s nothing else to say |
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