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Flat Line
Contributed by
taurusgem1
on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:23:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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As the furious light beckons me
My translucent body hovers
Amidst the sterile room
The slab of me, still; lunatic eyes
Blank lifeless stare
Grayish lips of sapphire parted
They see I am gone, yet they still fight
The monotone hum; flat line
Drawing its picture across the screen
Angelic peer pressured voices
Calling; fighting my will
Men with masks barking orders
Panic creeping from within
Vomiting from their words
The premature startle of death confuses
I am not ready to depart
This land of the whispering trees.
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taurusgem1
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2005-02-03 21:23:49]
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Re: Flat Line
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:49:12 PM AEST
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excellent poem, so sadly beautiful.... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Flat Line
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:37:14 PM AEST
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Nessa said it all, beautiful flow.~
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