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About Trevor
Contributed by
breny
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Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:17:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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your hair is buzzed and brown
and you never seem to wear a frown
your eyes are so bright
i could stare at them all night
i like the way you walk
when you're walking down the hall
i like the way you talk
and your basketball
i wish i could talk to you
but i'll trip on my shoe
i'm nervous when i'm around you
and i only wish you knew
that i love you
Copyright ©
breny
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2005-02-03 21:17:53]
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Re: About Trevor
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:30:10 PM AEST
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awww, sweet poem, i enjoyed reading it bren, so
much so i didn't noticed the problem with rhyming
lol . . . keep up the good work . . .
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Re: About Trevor
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:57:18 PM AEST
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| Yep I reconize the symtoms....you have fallen...keep writing though. |
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Re: About Trevor
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by O7NeVeS on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 12:26:49 AM AEST
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| Ahhh 7th grade love...I enjoyed this poem, it was cute! TD |
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Re: About Trevor
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 09:02:10 PM AEST
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Awww cute poem.
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Re: About Trevor
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 01:13:20 AM AEST
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| this is very sweet |
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Re: About Trevor
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by Writting_Fever on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 10:11:41 PM AEST
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| its so cute. the fact that your in 7th grade and in love is even cuter! |
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