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Feelings
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:11:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Captivated, filled with thoughts of you
Confused, unable to see what's true
Distressed, casting around for what I can find
Insane, losing my heart and mind
And it's all because of you
and everything you put me through
You have me wound around myself
With feelings I can't seem to shelf
'Round and 'round my mind you run
An endless circut that's never done
Content, with the friendship we share
Overwhelmed, with thoughts I can't bear
Hopeful, you'll see me where I stand
Fearful, afraid I will crash as I land
But you know it's all because of you
and all the prayers you put me through
You hold my heart and don't even know
Because I'm terrified to let it show
So 'round and 'round my mind you run
Thoughts of you are never done
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yellow_sundragon
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2005-02-03 21:11:40]
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Re: Feelings
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:31:28 PM AEST
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| Hey, Wow Really nice poem, I can very well relate!! This is a Great Poem ~!!!! |
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Re: Feelings
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:49:26 PM AEST
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this is beautiful hun, so well written and sooo sweet!! big huggles n' loves ya! nessamum xxx...
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Re: Feelings
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by O7NeVeS on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 12:28:24 AM AEST
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| Beautifully done! I can relate. TD |
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Re: Feelings
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by Angelic_Demon on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 06:29:29 PM AEST
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I hope he wakes up, Jaime.
Anyway, this is really good. :D Just remember, men are daft, so it always takes them a while to realize things.
Love, Mara
xoxoxo |
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Re: Feelings
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by freckle on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 08:01:40 PM AEST
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| Ah yes, relationships! You captured it so well in your write! I think most of them fit into the cliche...you can't live with 'em and you can't live without 'em! : ) |
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Re: Feelings
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 04:27:28 PM AEST
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(uh huh. Thank you, Mara)
Well-expressed and written piece. I know the feeling is not much fun. Here's to hoping he comes around.
Slàn
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Re: Feelings
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 03:53:44 AM AEST
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| awww this is so pretty!!! your wording is just lovely. very sweet. :) |
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Re: Feelings
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:34:01 AM AEST
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Very nicely done. This is beaurtiful hun. I think you should tell him, he won't know what he's missing otherwise. Written to perfection dear.
Hugs 'n Love
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Re: Feelings
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 03:56:03 PM AEST
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| That was great. Your poem read just like a song. Great job! |
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Re: Feelings
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 02:55:32 AM AEST
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wow what a nice poem,,, it was like a song.
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Re: Feelings
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by DarkFaerie on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 08:19:21 PM AEST
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| beautiful write. it has such a wonderful flow about it. i hope he's able to see how you feel. good luck : ) |
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