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December Babe
Contributed by
Valerie_Pearson
on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Nature's best qualities, patented her soul,
fulfilling our days, with a beautiful glow,
Our soul subdued, by this angelic figure,
and then, the Lord spoke and said
"we must give her,
a picture-some daughter, so many had loved,
will be swept by the angels and taken above",
At life's longest mile, we gazed and we stared,
a flame blew out, as we bathed in our tears,
This beautiful child, our December 'babe',
would be leaving our world,
her soul would be saved,
She eared her wings, a year ago,
a daughter .... a mother .... One Beautiful Soul!
Copyright ©
Valerie_Pearson
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2002-12-09 07:30:00]
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Re: December Babe
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 09:25:38 AM AEST
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| I understand your greif I'm still greiving over my mother,but in one sense happy for her to finally meet God! This was a beautiful write! Christina |
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Re: December Babe
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by OreO on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 10:42:17 AM AEST
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Valerie this is beautiful girl....my heart is right there....thanks for finding the strength and courage to share this one...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: December Babe
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 07:32:27 AM AEST
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| A very touching poem. Nice write. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: December Babe
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 01:38:02 AM AEST
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I loved your style and texture, meaning and emotion in your poem.I can relate to the person writing it, you,I thank you for your comment on mine,it warmed my heart.Take care,keep safe and may God bless you and Cindy.She is in my prayers.
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