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Three Words
Contributed by
Phantomdream
on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:08:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Across the blank white page,
her writing is a blur,
her tears smear the ink,
this is hard for her.
His love for her is over,
he has chose another,
to make into his bride,
leaving her to smother.
But no, her love has not gone,
and so must she let him know,
this note holds her affection,
this paper white as snow.
The words wouldn't come,
she couldn't write them down,
her mind wouldn't let her,
that line kept going 'round.
Three words that meant a lot,
three words before, 'I do,'
a single thought of companionship,
she couldn't write them, 'I love you.'
Copyright ©
Phantomdream
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2005-02-03 20:08:55]
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Re: Three Words
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by bonita2689 on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:31:11 PM AEST
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| This is really sad, nice write. |
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Re: Three Words
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:35:46 PM AEST
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| Aww...This is such a sad but beautiful write. Excellent work! |
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Re: Three Words
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by ToriVeigh on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:53:58 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful! Great write! |
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Re: Three Words
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by CurtisC on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:52:45 PM AEST
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this was extremely sad, but at the same time absolutely beautiful, excellent job...
Curtis |
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Re: Three Words
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by freckle on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 11:21:52 PM AEST
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| Good write. |
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