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Nate

Contributed by BabyGurl_Monkey on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:31:43 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

You were everything to me
You were my heart
My soul
My love
My boy
You helped me through the toughest times
Even when it was you who put me there
You protected me and kept me safe
You taut me how to live my life
You taut me how to be me and not to care what others thought
You taut me how love someone
You even taut me how to care
You were the one who showed me i was worth loving
You showed me someone cared
The day i herd the news that you had left me forever was the day i thought i was dead
I never thought you of all people would leave me in such a crule world
You left me without even saying good-bye or even giving me one last kiss
I thought i was going to die without you by my side
My world had came crashing down
The world stoped spining
The words "Hes dead" kept ringing in my head
The words that made so many tears fall down my face
The words that make my heart ache
Nothing in the world made sense
My heart was broken
My soul was shattered
And you were not there to hold me or comfort me
The boy who stole my heart
The boy who made every moment seem good
The boy who made me smile
The boy who made me happy just because he was there
The was no longer around
He had just disappeared
He was buried 6 feet under from something he held dear
Something that i once told him he would die from
Something that had taken both our lives and changed them into something unreal
Well i misses you with all my heart n' soul
I have never forgotten you or how u made me feel!
I love you still with all my heart!
Remember that im still here n' when its my time i will see you there!
I love you now n' forever Nate my BABY BOY!!!!!!!!!!!!

Copyright © BabyGurl_Monkey ... [ 2005-02-03 19:31:43]
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Re: Nate (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 10:07:57 PM AEST
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Wow, that's sooo sad. I'm very sorry! But it was such a great write! Very emotional. Best wishes to you,
-Drapes

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