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True Beauty
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
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Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:25:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Come from behind the shadows of the out spoken media
and look.
Look deeply into a place where you’ve never seen beauty.
Look into my eyes past the superficial and tell me
that the strength in my eyes is true beauty.
Tell me that the new found confidence is true beauty
tell me that accepting oneself is true beauty.
Come from behind the cascades of perfect
bodies and perfect faces and look at me.
A girl becoming a women, that’s beauty.
Coming into my skin, feeling comfortable
with myself at such a tough age.
That’s true beauty.
Coming from such a dark time
and seeing light,
spreading it onto the souls of strangers,
that’s true beauty.
So next time someone tells you other wise,
look into your own eyes,
because I will assure you,
true beauty
hides underneath sparkles that hold the midnight sky,
or the roaming quiet of an ocean,
true beauty lies within.
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Re: True Beauty
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by zenmind on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:37:13 PM AEST
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I thought this was a very inspirational piece. There is so much wisdom in this.
true beauty
hides underneath sparkles that hold the midnight sky,
or the roaming quiet of an ocean,
true beauty lies within.
I thought this was really beautiful, and for some reason I feel proud of you, like I'm a parent watching their child grow up into a wonderful loving person....or something like that....lol, I don't know why I feel that way, and please don't think that I think that I'm suprerior to you, because I don't.
Great job. Truth resonates throughout this peice
Be true,
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Re: True Beauty
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by bonita2689 on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:44:59 PM AEST
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| This is a lovely play on a common cliche... It goes deeper and makes it less "common" giving it strength and intensity and virtue. Thank you for sharing this, it's very insightful! |
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Re: True Beauty
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by Tanmaya on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 01:45:36 AM AEST
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'true beauty
hides underneath sparkles that hold the midnight sky,
or the roaming quiet of an ocean,
true beauty lies within.'
Absolutely beautiful!
Your words hold depth and profound meaning.
Well done! |
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