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Im Sorry
Contributed by
BabyGurl_Monkey
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Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:15:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Tell me what you saw in me
tell me what you felt
Tell me how i made you feel
IM sorry for all the pain i caused
Even all the tears
Im sorry for the anger
Even more for all the fear
IM sorry for all the hurt you felt
And even all the giult
Im sorry i left you behind
And gave it only one thought
Im sorry for hurting you and pushing you away
Im sorry for all my mistakes
Even more for all my will
Im sorry i never said good-bye
Or gave you one last hug
IM sorry for making you cry
Even more for making you wanna die
Im so sorry for being so messed up so angry and confused
IM just sorry for everything i put you through!
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Re: Im Sorry
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by wolfman on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:25:11 PM AEST
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if you are so sorry for what you are going to do then just dont do it, dont put them through this you already have an idea of what they are going to feel when you are gone, and if that makes you more regretful then all the more reason not to,I know that it seems like you have no choice but you do you just have to look ahrder if you cant look to yourself then look to your family and friends, if you dont have any there that look to us for yor help we are always here and we would hate to loss you after only just meet you, you are always welcome here no matter what. be strong dont give up and God bless.
I didi like this one it seemd very sincer and that isd why I am concernd for you please let me know if there is any thing tha ti can do to help if not me then please someone anyone, I will pray for yo. please do post again soon. God bless.
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Re: Im Sorry
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:33:25 PM AEST
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i agree 100% with wolfman. times might tough as hell right now but in the end it`ll get better, you only get one life...make the most of it. living it depressed messes up the only oppurtunity you have, meet people have fun, learn, live, love. one day you'll look back just as i did and thank God for not letting you go through with this. for giving you life. No one ever said life was going to be easy, so i wish you the best of luck. Dont let it win, the depression and stuff...please dont let it win. Fight until your heart hurts becuase in the end you'll learn strength, confidence and the true meaning of life's beauty. Dont give up.
Best wishes!
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Re: Im Sorry
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by Arsenic on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:58:42 PM AEST
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I like the way you captured the desire to seek forgivness, particularly at the end with "I'm sorry I never said good-bye". That's a particular feeling a lot have shared, though we think we're the only one, to have turned away and regreted it in the future. Good job capturing the feelings.
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Re: Im Sorry
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:44:32 PM AEST
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| work on your substance in your poems. repeating is not substance. |
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Re: Im Sorry
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by emystar on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 08:37:45 PM AEST
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Great writing but it reminds me of something one of my grand daughters did one day.
She luved to eat colds weenies and i handed one to her, she was giggling, shaking it around then touched it and said monkey, monkey. She was bearly old enuff to talk.
Very good writing, it's a mazing what reading a poet's pen name can trigger. |
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Re: Im Sorry
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by emystar on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 08:41:21 PM AEST
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Great writing but it reminds me of something one of my grand daughters did one day.
She luved to eat colds weenies and i handed one to her, she was giggling, shaking it around then touched it and said monkey, monkey. She was bearly old enuff to talk.
Very good writing, it's a mazing what reading a poet's pen name can trigger. |
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Re: Im Sorry
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by BabyGurl_Monkey on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 11:55:17 PM AEST
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| Thanx for all ur comments i kno i neva really said that but thatnk u. i am very pleased w/ this poem it was sumthin i wrote sum time ago that has a ery dear place close to my heart. so i thank u all for ur comments n' maybe one day i will be able to listen to all ur positive n' helpful information. thanx again |
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