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Alone in my Darkened Hovel
Contributed by
bobotheclown
on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Alone in my darkened hovel,
I sit
Alone in my darkened hovel,
I weep
No sunlight can get through
The walls are too high, too thick
Alone in my darkened hovel,
I scream
Alone in my darkened hovel,
Door locked tight against all intruders
Holding the pain inside
As I grow weaker and malnourished
Alone in my darkened hovel,
Dirty and broken
Alone in my darkened hovel,
I lick my cracked lips
And plot evil, demented things
As my body breaks apart
Alone in my darkened hovel,
I slowly go insane
Alone in my darkened hovel,
I drink in your lies
The air is getting thicker
My pupils are dilated
Alone in my darkened hovel,
Where no one can relate
Alone in my darkened hovel,
Starved for some comfort
Destroying my intellect
Flipping around, like a fish out of water
Alone in my darkened hovel,
I realize no one can understand
Alone in my darkened hovel,
I'm alone in my darkened hovel...
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Re: Alone in my Darkened Hovel
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by Vampy on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 06:13:13 AM AEST
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Hey Joel :-)
I love it, it's so dark.... wonderful. |
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Re: Alone in my Darkened Hovel
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by springchic1979 on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 09:40:01 AM AEST
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Dark, desolate, demented...just the way I like 'em! Great job joel, was a pleasure to read.
Yvonne |
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Re: Alone in my Darkened Hovel
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by OreO on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 10:46:06 AM AEST
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Wow joel my favorite lines were......I drink in your lies.....ahhh that is so deep..i know what this feeling feels like all to well....this is a very dark place to be, one which i am and will do whatever it takes to prevent from going back to...thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot....
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Re: Alone in my Darkened Hovel
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by Ophelia on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 10:57:50 AM AEST
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| Wow, that was intense!! You know what? I found that there is always someone there that can relate, and you won't find them hiding out. Great Write |
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Re: Alone in my Darkened Hovel
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by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 04:29:32 PM AEST
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| loving it... |
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Re: Alone in my Darkened Hovel
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 02:04:45 PM AEST
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Dearest Joel @-<-<<_
Great write my friend! Most certainly can identify, although the forces that be have blessed me gently with happiness and light, I'm certain that darkened hovel awaits in patient eagerness:)
your writing friend always Nessa |
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Re: Alone in my Darkened Hovel
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by Cancer on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 10:40:19 PM AEST
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definitely groovy. i been to the darkened hovel and i can appreciate the fact that it's not a great place to be, unless you feed off of that sort of thing.
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