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Now That Love is Everything
Contributed by
the_Ghost_Moth
on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 05:45:35 PM in AEST
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Now That Love is Everything
by
Ghost Moth
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Broken bones
knocking on the door
with
Brassed knuckles
Skeleton key
for
a chocolate covered
candy valentine heart
Red skull
kissed and kissed
and
full of dust
You fill the marrow
of
my bone-caged heart
now that love is everything
Now that love is everything
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copyright 2004 by Ghost Moth
Copyright ©
the_Ghost_Moth
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Re: Now That Love is Everything
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 06:37:01 PM AEST
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It is extremely bizarre that these words can hold warmth, but they do, and that makes them so powerful in my book.
You fill the marrow
of
my bone-caged heart
now that love is everything
Fascinating write.
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Re: Now That Love is Everything
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:19:55 PM AEST
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you gotta be the only one I know who could take skeletal references and turn them into a love sonnet. Kudos Gee Em...
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Re: Now That Love is Everything
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:33:40 PM AEST
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Its here I recall the hazy image of a rocketman, and bones . . . on Mars? totally unrelated, but its what I remember. I guess that this is now filed alongside it . . .
Marrow, in a bone-caged heart.
Creepily . . . nice?
Keep it up. |
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Re: Now That Love is Everything
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:21:03 PM AEST
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I can't say anything that anyone else hasn't
already said, so instead I'll commend you on
your pictures. They really are nice. lol. I like
how you have one for each poem now. Out of
pure curiousity, how exactly do you make
them? |
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Re: Now That Love is Everything
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:44:07 PM AEST
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You fill the marrow
of
my bone-caged heart
what a great line..wowzer.. |
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Re: Now That Love is Everything
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by Rxqueen on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:53:10 PM AEST
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You fill the marrow
of
my bone-caged heart
now that love is everything
I agree, that part was killer.
This was definately a different type of love poem, but it was still so hot. I love the graphic! |
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Re: Now That Love is Everything
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 02:25:38 PM AEST
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You are truely the master of unique!!
Wonderful combination! Only you could pull this off so successfully!! |
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Re: Now That Love is Everything
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 11:16:44 PM AEST
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Seriouly...I don't know how you pull something like this off...it was amazing, but I never could have expected something like this ever...like on Naz's comment, that pretty much sums it up...Excellent
Mason |
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