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Scabs
Contributed by
breny
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Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 05:44:27 PM in AEST
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My life is like a body
with scarbs from head to toe
and with the slightest movement
the blood, again, will flow
I have a scab for friends
who stab you in the back
another one for boyfriends
who leave and don't come back
I have one for deceit
And one for sinful lust
And all that's in between
that causes my distrust
A scab is like a wall
that's there to stop the flow
but the feelings along with it
do nothing else but grow
Then there is that day
that the blood again breaks free
by simply one mean phrase
that brings back a memory
Copyright ©
breny
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2005-02-03 17:44:27]
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Re: Scabs
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 06:33:02 PM AEST
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True and well written. I'm right there with ya.
Stitch |
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Re: Scabs
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 07:13:54 PM AEST
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beautiful breny, hits home, especialy the line "about the one u have cause of the friends who stab u in the back, a superb peice of writting.
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Re: Scabs
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by fielding88 on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 03:18:26 PM AEST
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| lol i wish i read this sooner, but by the time i finished that 669(!!) question survey i had 2 take a rest. But ya this was a really amazing write. I never once considered things the way u did here, and u really delivered ur message well. Keep it up! |
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Re: Scabs
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by xPureEcstacy_Ashx on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 06:50:43 PM AEST
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Hey great write. Ya it does seem like everything alwayz comes back to bite you in the ass once again.
~Ash |
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Re: Scabs
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 07:05:46 PM AEST
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| You know about twenty six years ago when I was in first grade a boy would always tear off his scabs to impress the girls and let it bleed out..The bad thing here is that is all that came to mind when I read this.. |
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