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Why?
Contributed by
shadowed_soul
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Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:18:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Why is everything such a struggle?
Why is there no one there to give me a cuddle?
Why does everyone I love leave me?
Why does no one let me be?
Why must I be expected to do so much?
Why does everything crumble that I touch?
Why do you do these things to me?
Why don't you see?
Why do I worry all the time?
Why is everything I do treated like a crime?
Why is life so unfair
Why do I care?
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2005-02-03 14:18:39] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Why?
(User Rating: 1 ) by noone on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:39:43 PM AEST (User
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And again another brilliant poem from melissa,lol. No spelling mistakes this time, whoohoo. I think it would look cool if you put the word 'even' at the end.
'Why do I even care?'
But it would make no difference, iam just fussy,lol. You are getting better by every poem, i am sure everyone else will agree!
Kirsty x |
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Re: Why?
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 03:22:55 PM AEST (User
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why a question is something which we ask ourselves regularly, well I do anyways lol
another good write, look forward to reading more from you soon,
pix xx |
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