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Missing You All
Contributed by
shadowed_soul
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Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:07:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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The day that I left was the saddest of all.
A lump gathers in my throat like a large ball.
Every time I think of leaving I feel down,
when I remember I can’t help but thrown.
I try to forget the hurt on your face.
My heart starts beating like it’s in a race.
When images come into my mind I set them aside.
I try to hide my feelings to keep my pride.
The good times we had together will always be with me,
when we rode our bikes and pretended to drink tea.
The moments will leave me never.
Even when we said we’ll be together forever.
The truth is I miss all of you.
I hope when you hear my name you wont ask who?
I’ll think about you everyday.
I miss you all is what I want to say.
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2005-02-03 14:07:03]
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Re: Missing You All
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:30:00 PM AEST
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I can identify with this.There are a lot of people that I once knew with whom I have lost touch for one reason or another.
I often wonder what they are doing and if they still remember me.
Good write
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Re: Missing You All
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by noone on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:31:44 PM AEST
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This is brilliant! It makes me sad, that you regret the move although we would never have met otherwise. I hope you find them one day which i am sure you will. Watch the spelling with 'frown'. Otherwise, it is lovely, keep writing( although cut it down a bit, you are way ahead of me,lol)
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Re: Missing You All
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by pixie on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 03:21:38 PM AEST
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the memories of your friends will always live on, I have many some painful and some good, a very good write Melissa
takecare
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