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Suicide's Sweet Lullaby
Contributed by
crazylady
on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 12:39:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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come and hear
my lullaby of sorrow
have no fear
there will be no tommarow
death is life
and life is death
walk to the light
and breathe your last breath
i sing this song
sweet sorrow is mine
death has come
and now is the time
die for a moment
a moment in time
you only die for a moment
and this moment is mine
so i slit my wrist
and i shed a tear
death on my to-do list
and im filled with fear
but the pain i do not fear
as i sing this sorrowful lullaby
the thought of you brings hushed tears
as i tell the world goodbye
this is suicides sweet lullaby
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crazylady
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2005-02-03 12:39:08]
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Re: Suicide's Sweet Lullaby
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by pixie on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 12:43:43 PM AEST
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it seems like a sweet lullaby at the time of depseration, a deep and depressing write, powerful and sad
pix xx |
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Re: Suicide's Sweet Lullaby
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 01:18:45 PM AEST
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i love the fact that u say music is your life, it is also
mine 2 and will always be my first love, as 4 your
poem u have the comand of a musician, the style
of a candid painter, and the familair ring of a poet
in peril, this was very well written, in a phrase, very
captivating . . .
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Re: Suicide's Sweet Lullaby
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by supergirlblibs on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 01:44:11 PM AEST
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| one word *WOW*, this poem is simply amazing! i liked the flow n words where top! keep it up! |
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Re: Suicide's Sweet Lullaby
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by wolfman on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 01:46:49 PM AEST
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I hear the feeling in your woods and notice that you view suicide as beauty, I to have looked at it this way to, then I lost someone close to me because of their suicide it left nothing but pain, qusetions and sorrow, it didnt take his life quick he suffered for almost twenty min. on the way to the hospital, after that suicide became a way for me to punish my family and friends if I ever decided to. and the aspect of you singing this shows that you have no reason to stop, just think about who you would be leaving if no one there then all of us here we would miss you and your beautiful writings to so please be strong God will help you and so will we.
I liked this, I could almost hear the music a sweet song with a bitter ending. please dont think like that I know that life can get you down but dont give up it wont always be so tough just hold on and keep writing and posting for us to read. God bless.
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