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progress
Contributed by
darkeyedman
on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The old houses,
Pride of the 1920s
Before the crash,
Fall before me
As the rats scurry
Before the crash.
And the ball’s swing
Arches high in aprehention,
Splinters the building,
Levels the masonry,
And settles to earth
While an old gentleman
With wide brimmed hat
And a paint brush
Swath of white hair
Extending below,
Cries a silver tear.
Dust from the crash.
Copyright ©
darkeyedman
... [
2002-12-09 03:00:00]
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Re: progress
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by springchic1979 on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 10:05:16 AM AEST
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A very moving poem, darkeyedman.
Well done. *applaud*
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Re: progress
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by OreO on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 10:49:45 AM AEST
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This is kinda sad in it's own way but yet inspiring because of the progress it's making...this is beautiful...thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot...
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Re: progress
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by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 04:40:42 PM AEST
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| wow...i really love this one... |
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