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Bleeding Black
Contributed by
Jezebella
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Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:53:31 AM in AEST
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her eyes are swollen from all the crying,
as she sits in the corner, slowly dying.
her insides are spinning, swirling around,
she covers her ears, ignoring the sound.
the silence is eating away at her heart,
while the heartbreak slowing breaks her apart.
he'll never come back, no matter what she'll say,
for love, i guess, this is the price you must pay.
as she grips the knife she thinks again, what will bring him back,
she knows nothing will and she is now bleeding black.
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Jezebella
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2005-02-03 09:53:31]
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Re: Bleeding Black
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by pixie on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:32:39 AM AEST
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emotional and sad, expressed well,
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Re: Bleeding Black
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 07:53:04 PM AEST
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'the silence is eating away at her heart,
while the heartbreak slowing breaks her apart'
that is my favorite part. i really like this poem alot. it isn't very long, but is still very good. nice form & rhyming. wonderful poem...keep it up...
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