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memories
Contributed by
darkeyedman
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Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 02:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Partitioned by age and glass,
Staring out the sitting room window,
And cuddled by her mink collar,
She longs at the children
Walking friend by friend
By another friend,
And her smile is lost to the far away;
Her mind to another day.
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darkeyedman
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2002-12-09 02:30:00]
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Re: memories
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by OreO on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 03:07:32 PM AEST
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This is some beautiful memories...and in such a short write...i love the first line .....Partitioned by age and glass......tha's beautiful....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot....
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Re: memories
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by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 9th December 2002 @ 04:43:14 PM AEST
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| the last two lines are so good...i love this...well done... |
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