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Lost
Contributed by
Davinah
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Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:10:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I guess I had it coming
Living on the edge for so long
Got punished badly for my longing
to explore the other side
Took a bit of it with me to where I am now
I had nothing but now I'm left with even less
Sad but true; I must confess
I'm craving for those moments spent in agony
Everything was upside down
I ran with the dogs
And cried to the howling wind
Broke every promise I made to myself
When you know what you want
It’s only a matter of taking
And one day I’ll return to take back what’s mine
To regain the power I once felt inside
Copyright ©
Davinah
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2005-02-03 08:10:50]
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Re: Lost
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by zaknafein8891 on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:24:49 AM AEST
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| Great Poem. I liked it alot but personally I think it could have used a little punctuation here and there. |
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Re: Lost
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by tx_graffiti_gal on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:43:07 AM AEST
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| Liked your poem alot. I like that there is still within you to do good and want to. So we all fall on our knees, get up and try again. so to speak. temptations come but they come to make us stronger. one day no tempts will come and we passed the test........ great write. sandy |
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Re: Lost
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:23:52 AM AEST
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Self-confidence is a strength so easily lost and so very difficult to gain back. Leaves us longing for the times when something else, however false, so easily took its place.
Nice stuff.
Stitch |
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Re: Lost
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 05:54:40 AM AEST
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sadly beautiful.... hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Lost
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by secretwind on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 04:15:43 PM AEST
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Running with the pack can wear you down
well done |
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